Thursday, August 25, 2011

Who Are You?

This post is for juniors only.



In a thoughtful, thorough essay, answer the following question:

Who are you?

Remember, this is your first opportunity to demonstrate who you are as a person and who you are as a student - so do your best!  Use specific details, correct grammar, and correct spelling. Your essay must be multiple paragraphs. You must write for the entire period. You may wish to use some of the following questions to shape or guide your response:


  • What have you done?
  • Where have you been?
  • What are you goals?
  • What mistakes have you made?
  • What do you like?
  • What do you not like?
  • How do you spend your time?
  • What drives you?
  • What makes you different?

If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask one of the instructors. Good luck, and have fun.

1 comment:

  1. Caroline SerritellaAugust 28, 2011 at 5:47 PM

    Caroline Serritella
    August 25, 2011
    English/3
    Cowlin

    Who I Am

    I am a junior in high school who I think has had a different life than most. I’m the youngest

    and the only girl in my family. I’ve been thinking about what I want to be when I get older since I

    was about five years old, and I’ve been driven ever since. At first, I wanted to be a teacher, but

    now I’ve come to the thought of either a doctor or lawyer. I’ve been to places which I could only

    dream of living and that’s what keeps me going. I have several goals, but my main ones are to

    make a good amount of money every year when I get older, have a family, and to try to travel all

    over world.

    I spend a lot my time working out, studying for school, and just enjoying life at my age. In

    the spring, my brother plays D1 baseball and while all my friends are at turnabout having a good

    time; I’m out traveling with my family to support him. I’m gone a ton of weekends traveling back

    and forth to his college and then there's volleyball during the week. During that time, it can

    get a little hectic but I’ve learned to time everything well, so I never fall behind.

    I’ve realized recently that there are just so many places in the world that I’ve never seen and

    all I want to do is visit them. Another thing that drives me to do well in my life is traveling. I love

    to travel and want to go to as many places as possible before I die, but I know that takes a ton of

    money. I’ve been to a ton of places in the United States, including Alaska, but I’ve never been out

    of the country. I have two places that I want to visit before I die. One place is Bora Bora, which is

    a little island in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, and the other place is Europe. Traveling can teach

    me so many things, such as how lucky I am or it could show me how different peoples' lifestyles

    are and just getting used to different customs.

    I’m the kind of person who could get used to anything if you just tell me what to do. I could

    live anywhere, and I could get used to different traditions. I know that when it comes to different

    places to visit I’ll have to get comfortable with the area that I’m in or else it’s kind of a waste. I try

    to prepare myself for every kind of possibility there is so I’m never disappointed. Another thing

    that makes me different is that, in the kind of town that Glenview is, I believe that there's a group of

    people who expect this glorious lifestyle but don't realize what really is going on in the world and

    I'm not one of those people. I read articles, I watch the news, and I believe that the kids my age


    who don't do either of those things are very close minded and don't really care.

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